Tuesday, 29 March 2011

Black Mist Rough Cut



This is our rough cut for our opening sequence. We gained feedback from the rest of our group. They had four options, minimal, basic, proficient and excellent and had to assign one of these four comments to a range of categories. In summary this is what they had to say:

We were excellent and at holding a shot steady where appropriate, but some said we were proficient.

A huge majority said that we were proficient at framing a shot, including and excluding elements as appropriate with ne group saying were only basic.

The rest of the group were split between wether or not we used a variety of shot distances as appropriate. an equal amount said we were excellent or proficient on this aspect of our film.

Most if the group said we were proficient at shooting material at to the task set with one group saying we were only basic and one group saying we were excellent.

The majority of the group said we were proficient at Mise en scene, including, colour, figure, lighting, objects and setting with one group saying it was only basic.

Again there was a divide between the group as to whether our films editing so that the meaning is apparent to the viewer was proficient or basic. However one group said that it was excellent.

The majority of the group said that we were proficient at using varied shot transitions and other effects selectively and appropriately for the task. However two groups said that were excellent at this and even minimal, the latter being the first comment for our group.

The majority of our group said that our film was basic went it came to using sound with images and editing appropriately for the task set. This was mainly due to the fact this was a rough cut and that were focusing all of our sound for our final cut.

The group said that were mainly proficient with a mentionable amount of others also saying that were excellent.

To Improve our film we are going to include sound that will emphasise much of the actions throughout and to also develop an eerie atmosphere audiences would expect to find in a horror. We are also going to film extra shots are record narrative voices to help build the story of our film so it is much more clear to the audience and so that there is also a purpose to the intentions of our characters' actions. This will also add to he amount of shots we have and gives us chance to add more variety. We are going to edit the colours, brightnesses and contrasts of our shots so that they are dark to help create an atmosphere that was present when filming but will be effective when watched on screen by others.

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